Title: NAKED
Genre: YA
contemporary
Word count:
66,000
Sixteen-year-old
Anna would do anything for Luis, her pimp. Then they're busted and she's sent
back to the suburbs where everyone knows her secrets. The town whore has no
friends— until she meets Arney.
I look into the familiar blank eyes that stare back at me
from a Missing Person’s poster. The name reads: Anna Rodriguez.
The name’s familiar, but it’s not me. Not anymore.
I turn away from the innocent thirteen-year-old in the
poster, with her pony tail and pearls around her neck. Now I just find myself
wondering how much I could cop out of a necklace like that. Three hundred?
Every time I pass this poster I stop and stare at the
girl I used to be, but that just brings attention. I’m not allowed to bring
attention.
So I keep walking and make a plan to go the long way
around Bleeker Street so I won’t ever see my parents attempt at finding me
again. I cross my arms, and breathe out to see if I can see my breath. It’s
getting cold, I hate cold.
I shake my head. I mean, it’s been three years, I don’t
see why my parents still try to find me. I’m not their little girl
anymore.
You’d think they could at least find a better picture,
you know? No one would guess that girl was me. Why not use a picture like that
one from Halloween when I dressed up like Cindy Lauper but really just looked
like a hooker? That might catch someone’s eye.
I smile at my
stupid joke, but know they want to cling to the ideal, pristine daughter they
always thought they had. Too bad I was never that girl.
Double line: Query and 1st 100 pages! - Pete Knapp
ReplyDeleteWould love to see more of this! Would you send the pitch, first 50 pages, and a one page synopsis to pooja@kimberleycameron.com?
ReplyDeletePooja Menon