We're extremely excited to announce an upcoming event
where agented authors, industry interns, and editors team up with
aspiring writers to shine up their manuscripts and pitches to present to some
awesome agents.
Here's the deets...
· The teams will consist of 1 agented author or
industry intern or editor (coaches) and 1 aspiring author.
· November 26: The coaches (listed on the linky
below) will post on their blogs what genre/category they want to coach. They'll
be very specific genres. Aspiring writers will hop around and decide which
coaches best fit their manuscripts.
· November 26 through December 5 until 8PM EST: Aspiring writers will submit 3
"applications" to their top choices for coaches to the contest email
(brendadrakecontests@gmail.com).
That means, participants will send three separate emails to the contest email
addressing each with one of their three top choices for coach.
· December 5 through December 10: Coaches will
read the applications and pick teammates.The coaches don't have to pick from
their applications. If a coach passes on an application, it is then up for
grabs and another coach, if they haven't connected to their applicants, can
snatch it after notifying the applicant and if the applicant chooses the coach.
· December 12: Teams will be announced. On the
announcement post there will be instructions on how the winners must send their
work.
· December 12 through January 16: Each coach will
read their teammate's manuscript and give general notes on any issues they
find. The coach will help their teammate get his or her pitches ready for the
agent round.
· Note: The material for the agent round will be a
3 sentence pitch and the first 250 words of your manuscript. Coaches will read
manuscripts and query letters only once and give notes. It is up to the writer
to use the notes from their coaches to get the manuscript and query letter in
as best shape as they can to send to requesting agents. The coaches will
critique the three sentence pitch and first 250 words. The coaches will read
them as many times as they deem necessary. In no way will writers expect the
coaches to read the manuscript and query letter more than once or the pitches
more than twice.
· January 20: Coaches will submit shined pitches
to the contest email.
· January 23 and 24: Agents will read and make
requests on the pitches they like (it is likely that not all participants will
get requests).
· January 25: We'll announce the team with the
most requests and who will take home the winning prizes (an amazon gift card
for each).
· This is open to finished manuscripts only.
· You may only enter one manuscript.
· Only the genres requested by each coach will be
considered for the contest.
Formatting...
Subject line: Pitch Wars Application: Coach Name you want
to apply for: Title (Example: Pitch Wars Application: Brenda Drake: GONE WITH
THE WIND)
Name: Your Name
Genre: The genre of your manuscript
Word Count: The word count of your manuscript
Query letter here
(embedded in email). Single spaced. No indentions. A space between each
paragraph.
First five pages of the manuscript here (embedded in
email). Single spaced. No indentions. A space between each paragraph.
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REMINDER: You can send an
application for up to 3 coaches.
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Thanks again for doing this, Brenda. I'm so excited to be a part of it!
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you are part of this, too! <3
DeleteVery excited about this!! Can't wait until the 26th to take a look at what the mentors/coaches are looking for!! Fingers crossed I've got what it takes;-)
ReplyDeleteI CAN NOT WAIT. I'm so excited... I WILL be ready for this!!!
ReplyDeleteSounds like fun! Will definitely submit.
ReplyDeleteHappy dance! Good luck!
DeleteWow! This is amazing! So is that five pages when they're single-spaced or before you make them single-spaced?
ReplyDeleteThat is 5 pages doubled space before you make them singled.
DeleteHow much fun is this?!?! I can't wait. You're officially on my calendar...=)
ReplyDeleteYay! Glad to be penned in (not penciled, right? No erasing us!)
DeleteWoohoo! Excited :)
ReplyDeleteYay! Me too!
DeleteI didn't realize I follow a lot of these mentors, until my feed was full of post after post for Pitch Wars! It sounds like so much fun, but I'm not quiiite finished with Crow's Rest. I'll have to watch from the sidelines.
ReplyDeleteHence the grenade - total blog feed explosion!
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ReplyDeleteWow! This sounds like the coolest thing ever--I am so going for it!
ReplyDeleteGood luck everyone and thanks to Brenda and the Coaches for giving up their time to help us "Newbies"
We are SO cool ... and so are you!
DeleteI am SO excited for this. What a fun contest :)
ReplyDeleteIt's going to be TONS of fun!
DeleteSpunds really really awesome...but i know my new manuscript will not be ready in time :(
ReplyDeleteI say you work 24 hour days until it is - get to it!!!! (You know I'm kidding, right? 12 hours a day would do it.) *grins*
DeleteWow! This is truly a great opportunity for writers:)
ReplyDeleteI love stuff like this!
DeleteThis sounds amazing! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteOoh fun. I'm excited!
ReplyDeleteSounds like a great contest, though I could certainly live without the term "aspiring writer." That's one term I'll never understand, since to me, if you write, and have for a long time, that act makes you a writer, even if you're not published. Nothing "aspiring" about that!
ReplyDeleteI guess I meant that the writers are aspiring to get an agent. Sorry if I offended. And this is the part where I pull out the dictionary and get the definition... LOL
Deleteas·pire
[uh-spahyuhr] verb (used without object), as·pired, as·pir·ing.
1.
to long, aim, or seek ambitiously; be eagerly desirous, especially for something great or of high value (usually followed by to, after, or an infinitive): to aspire after literary immortality; to aspire to be a doctor.
Thrilled to be a part of it! Thanks for having me!
ReplyDeleteThanks for doing it!!
DeleteYou should really indicate which agents are participating. Because otherwise you may end up with writers who have already queried all your participating agents. That would be a waste of the coaches' time and efforts.
ReplyDeleteThe list will be up by 12/5 we still are waiting on some responses.
DeleteThanks so much for organizing this. I was just commenting on how slow November was when, bam, I saw this. :-)
ReplyDeleteI agree an agent list would be helpful. As I hope to be querying a new piece so that's less of an issue for me. If not, yep, a list would be uber helpful.
We're creating the buzz and getting the writer and their manuscripts ready. The agent list will be up soon.
DeletePut you up on my contest list for the week! Will highlight it on the blog when I do next weeks post. :-)
DeleteAck, signing up to be a mentor is over? Will there a be Season 2 of Pitch Wars? #lookingahead Such a fun idea, can't wait to follow it!
ReplyDeleteI always do repeat performances for successful contests, so if this is a hit, we'll do it again.
DeleteIt's a hit, do it again! (I can see the future)
DeleteYaay, I'm SO excited to be part of this! It's going to be lotsa fun!
ReplyDeleteI'm excited you are too! <3
DeleteWow--so many awesome mentors! How can we possibly pick just three? You guys better be dang specific in what kind of project you'd like to mentor. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks again, Brenda, for another awesome contest.
You're welcome and they should be pretty specific on their likes.
DeleteThis might be a really silly question, buttttttt do we address our query letters to the coaches? Or should it just be a generic query?
ReplyDeleteThanks for much for putting this on!!! You rock :)
Oh you might want to and turn up the charm. LOL
Deletehahaha done! thanks so much!
DeleteHi there - I know "YA" stands for, but what is MG and NA? Many thanks :)
ReplyDeleteMG = Middle Grade
DeleteNA = New Adult
Thank you :O)
DeleteI know it's a request for five pages when it's originally double-spaced, but if I have a novel in verse would I be able to do 5 pages that were single-spaced? Because that's only 800 words. Not trying to cheat the system, but five pages of a verse novel is really short :) Thanks for organizing such an amazing contest.
ReplyDeleteYes, do that.
DeleteThank you! :)
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ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful, thank you! I hope I get selected. Do the mentors only chose one author or several?
ReplyDeleteI'm a new author and am so touched when established authors help out. Authors are a real pay-it-forward group of folks. It's refreshing!
Brenda, you and your contests... they're a bit amazing, is all :) Excited about this one - very cool concept with the mentoring component. Can't wait to enter and fingers crossed I get chosen :)
ReplyDeleteI am so excited about this! What a fantastic contest; it's a rare thing to be able to get feedback from industry professionals and this is just so perfect. A real confidence booster for those who win, thank you for making it a possibility!
ReplyDeleteI do have a question, sorry if it's been asked - is there a limit on entries (like, only the first 300 people get in)? Or will everyone who submits between the 26th and 5th be considered?
I just sent emails to find out about the mentors and after a little research have found your website and all the information needed, Sorry to have bothered you with an email. Am reading mentors wish list today. Thank you for taking so much time to help others. It is very much
ReplyDeleteappreciated.
This is going to be awesome! So, I just saw on Twitter something about a confirmation email...I submitted all three yesterday and I haven't gotten one yet. Do I need to be patient or could something have gone wrong?
ReplyDeleteIf your last name is Christian - I got all three. :)
DeleteIt is! Haha. Wonderful, thank you!
DeleteI'm sure this is a really stupid question, but I figured I'd rather ask a stupid question than do something wrong, so here go:
ReplyDeleteIs the five pages before or after we add the space between each paragraph? I know that it's five double-spaced pages (of 2.5 single-spaced pages), but I wasn't sure if copied over the pages and then added the space between paragraphs or if we added the spaces and then found the five pages.
Sorry to bother you, but this is the first time that I've participated in a contest like this, and I'm a bit paranoid about doing something stupid. :) Thanks! And thanks for creating this awesome contest!
Add the spaces after you copy it over.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteOkay, I'm so in! I've never done anything like this but I'm so, so, so excited! A big thanks to everyone who has taken the time to help us hopefuls. Did I mention, I'm excited;)
ReplyDeleteSorry to be a bother, but not sorry enough to not be!
ReplyDeleteI submitted and received emails that my submission were wrongly formatted. On my end, both in the original and in the reply emails, the formatting was single spaced with one space between paragraphs. I resubmitted, using plain text.
Will I get some sort of confirmation that they were received with proper formatting?
Thank you ever so much.
Okay, stomache in knots. Wondering why I sent. But then I'm so excited that I did. Wait. Can I have it back. No keep it. This is how it is every time I send out a query. Thank you for doing this. Excited but scared.
ReplyDeleteIf you could just tell me why we do this to ourselves...
Thanks again.
Sheri
PS I think I may need to post this 3 times as I sent out 3. Feeling sick again.
I just re-read the formatting and realized I had indents! OH NO! I won't be cast out will I? I did everything else right. I feel stupid now. Thank you for putting this together. I appreciate this awesome opportunity. :)
ReplyDeleteRacheal
No problem. It was put through.
Delete*phew* Thank you! :)
DeleteHow many people can a mentor pick for her team?
ReplyDeleteOne, and two alternates in case the one drops out.
DeleteAny idea how many pitches were received? It would be nice to gauge the competition. Thanks for this wonderful opportunity.
ReplyDeleteIs this the right place to find out the teams? Will chosen mentees get an email or have to search out their mentor?
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