Title: ACE OF SHADES
Word Count: 82,000
Three Sentence
Pitch:
Seventeen-year-old Enne Alfero roams the magical Victorian-like
shadow world searching for her lost mother. Her only ally is Levi Glaisyer, a
hot street lord and card dealer at a casino. When the casino’s owner tricks
Enne with an unbreakable vow to work as an assassin, Enne and Levi must play
the city’s politicians in a deadly game for their lives.
Question 1:
In your MC's voice, what costume character do you relate most to and why?
I
would probably be a ballerina because I already have the costume for it.
Question 2: As
an author, what makes your manuscript a tasty treat (aka marketable/unique)?
ACE OF
SHADES is unique because it combines elements of steampunk with fantasy by
setting the story in the 'shadow world,' an alternate version of Victorian
London. It has street gangs, romance, acrobats, assassins, and deadly card
games all rolled up into one story. It will appeal to fans of Boardwalk Empire,
Spirited Away, and historical fiction.
First 200 Words:
Lourdes always told me that if she went missing for two
weeks, she was dead. It’s been four.
I try not to dwell on that as I pull on my black tights,
leotard, and long-sleeve t-shirt for ballet class. She’ll be back. She always
comes back.
Only I don’t know how to keep waiting. I don’t know how
to keep going to school, and dance, and gymnastics, and pretending that nothing
is wrong. That I haven’t eaten Easy Mac four times this week. That I don’t jump
to the window every time headlights sweep past my room and then disappear down
the street.
But Lourdes told me to wait. That’s her protocol: say
nothing and wait for someone to make contact.
But I can’t, I can’t keep waiting for “someone.” And each
day I feel a little bit smaller, a little bit quieter, and a lot more alone.
This isn’t the first time she’s gone missing. But only
for a few days, a week maybe. Never this long. I always assumed she’s a secret
agent or something, but I doubt the James Bond types are normal, the kind of
people who can’t function in the morning without coffee and wear the same
nylons three days in a row, like she did.
Like she does, I mean.

Have some starbursts!
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