Friday, September 7, 2012
Pitch Madness Entry B-8: HAROLD - THE KID WHO RUINED MY LIFE AND SAVED THE DAY
Genre: Middle Grade Contemporary
Word Count: 35,000
Harold has ruined
Jake’s life for the last time. So what if Harold’s “special” and a genius at
baseball trivia and Algebra? But Harold’s baseball knowledge just might help
Jake’s team beat the undefeated Comets.
On the first day of sixth grade, I cracked open the door
and looked outside. The bus stop was empty.
So far, so good. I’d figured Harold’s mom would drive him this year like
she did when he was in kindergarten. Harold has trouble when it comes to new
things. Well, that’s one of his problems.
I walked toward the stop and from behind I heard, “Hey
Jake! Wait up! It’s 8:03. Bus Number 6 will be here at 8:07.”
I walked faster and called over my shoulder, “Thanks for
the update, Harold. I didn’t know I was so early. Tomorrow, I’ll sleep in a
whole 4 minutes.”
Harold caught up with me and said, “I woke up at 6:33,
but Mom said I couldn’t come out until I saw you.”
Great. Where is
that bus?
“Hey, Jake, have you ever heard of Harvey Haddix?” he
asked while he rummaged through his book bag.
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I write young adult and middle grade novels. I'm represented by Peter Knapp at Park Literary. Look for my debut young adult novel, LIBRARY JUMPERS releasing February, 2014.
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