Friday, September 7, 2012
Pitch Madness Entry B-6: GARAGE BOY
Genre: YA Contemporary
Word Count: 60,000
Hanley can’t decide
which is worse: that she’s harboring a fugitive, or that she's in love with
one. It all started when a stranger with a secret made his home in her garage.
The third step down holds my fate in its hands. There,
the padding beneath the beige carpet is almost non-existent. The supporting
boards and beams creak with age. I learned these facts the hard way back in 8th
grade, after my parents discovered the word “curfew,” and once again earlier
this year when I was too excited, too drunk, too something to remember the
Third Step Rule.
Tonight I don’t forget. I clutch the wooden banister and pass over Third Step onto its silent neighbor, Fourth Step. I pause and listen. It takes a long second before the familiar chainsaw of my dad’s snoring sounds again. I’m in the clear for now.
Tonight I don’t forget. I clutch the wooden banister and pass over Third Step onto its silent neighbor, Fourth Step. I pause and listen. It takes a long second before the familiar chainsaw of my dad’s snoring sounds again. I’m in the clear for now.
I tiptoe down the remaining stairs. The front door is
before me, freedom within reach, but that door creaks and groans too much for
my needs. I inch through the foyer in the direction of the well-oiled garage
door.
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I write young adult and middle grade novels. I'm represented by Peter Knapp at Park Literary. Look for my debut young adult novel, LIBRARY JUMPERS releasing February, 2014.
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Sounds cool. I wanna read the first 75 for definite. Five body shots!
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