Friday, September 7, 2012
Pitch Madness Entry B-5: FOSTER CABIN
Genre: Mystery/ Horror
Word Count: 62,000
Forty-five years
ago, ten children went missing and turned up dead in a cabin in the woods. Now
history is repeating itself. Someone’s targeting children again. And their sight
is set on Nathan and Leila.
I was going to die. I coughed out a lungful of thick black
smoke. My vision was blurred as if I were looking through someone’s thick glasses.
I bumped into something and fell over. Pain rippled up my leg as it fell on an
ignited beam. There was barely any oxygen left in the place; I gasped for the
last bit and then nudged my collar over my nose and cracking lips. The heat was
intense, clawing at me like an invisible feline. I slowly got up, forgetting to
stay low.
The air smelled like burning plastic and vomit burned my
throat like acid. I inched my way through the black smoke and flames.
I shouldn’t be
here. I should have never come back.
I stumbled, but caught myself. It felt like my pores were
being fried. The moisture drained from my face, leaving me with pink burns. The
plastic tie that bound my hands began to melt, like lava dripping down my wrists,
making me scream.
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I write young adult and middle grade novels. I'm represented by Peter Knapp at Park Literary. Look for my debut young adult novel, LIBRARY JUMPERS releasing February, 2014.
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