Friday, September 7, 2012
Pitch Madness Entry B-4: SNAKES IN PARADISE
Word Count: 60,000
Genre: YA Historical
While enjoying a
captivating new social life during the summer of 1929, 15-year-old Dorothy
Brooks must contend with anti-Semitism and bootlegging, two evils poisoning her
New England resort town.
You know that kid who always has whatever is new, better
and best? The one who is kind of a bore but you’re friends anyway because you
like playing with their toys? For me, that would be my neighbor, Alicia Hall.
But today I had something she wanted.
And I couldn’t wait to tell her about it.
I kicked my legs hard and propelled the wooden swing
higher, staring at the back of her big old house, which sat smugly basking in
the morning sun, freshly painted blue shutters gleaming. She should be out
right about—
Yep. The back door creaked open and Alicia clattered
across the porch in her new high heels with the ankle strap and button. The hem
of her floral chiffon dress fluttered as she moved, exposing her plump dimpled
knees.
My mother would definitely disapprove. Just yesterday she
told me in one of her lectures, “Bobbed hair and short skirts are signs of
civilization’s decline.”
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